MY NARRATIVE.

HALLOWEEN: THE CANDY MAN

On Halloween There was this person called the candy man he loved eating candy bars he had magic powers He asked random people HOW WOULD YOU REACT  IF A CANDY BAR HAD MAGIC POWERS.

One morning he went shopping to buy him lots of candy bars He went to buy a pet to it was a dog.When he was walking home he stop at this bus stop At the back of the bus was heaps of candy bars.

One night on Halloween When the candy man went shopping for food he saw this person but he didn’t know who he was the candy man thought it was someone he knew from candy man.

He went back to his house to put up his Halloween Design outside of his house But he found out who it was It was his friend Lina then he thought she would remember him and she did.But he used his powers to make you a human but it didn't work (THE END)

MY LI IS TO EDIT MY NARRATIVE BY USING THE TEE STRUCTURE.

Today I have been editing my Narrative it was Based on a candy bar who had magic powers.I had to edit my hole story.Ad I even add a picture.What we had to use for are Narrative was 9 things.