Blog Commenting

Today my class has been blog commenting on different schools. Today we blogged comment on Ruma Tahi @ Karoro School. The person I have commented on was Noah. I have been leaving nice comments and questions. What I really like about blog commenting is that we get to see other people work and we can leave them good feedback's.

Professor Stephen Hawking

Sadly Professor Stephen Hawking passed away last week. Today we have been finishing of a DLO we have created that is based on Professor Stephen Hawking. What we did for this DLO is that we got to answer some question but put it in our own words. This DLO is meant to show how Professor Stephen Hawking was a very good person and how he was a very famous Physicist. What I really like about making this DLO is that I got to learn more about Professor Stephen Hawking.

The Hunted Adventure No Return

The haunted adventure no return!!!

There was a girl who enjoyed going to the library, her name was Isabella.

She always got mocked in other words by bullies.

After school she would always go to her favourite place the library,

because no one could touch or mock her. She would always go to the library

and issue more than one book. After the library she would always go to her

very own secret hideout, where she kept all of her books. The book she really

likes is Harry potter or Alice  in wonderland. But when she reads it she always

finds a mystery and she tries to find out more about it. Than she heard there was

this haunted library with books no one has never seen before.

This just wanted Isabella

to find out more about this spooky library.

But when both of her feet touched the dirty

sticky carpet there was no turning back. But Isabella was trying to open t

he doors

but it didn’t work so she tried to say help me help me but than she died.

So she

gave up and no one saw her ever again.  That was the end of Isabella life

for all eternity.

Our learning today was writing. What we did for writing was we got to do a charter description. What we did was we got to describe a young girl with heaps of books around her. What my charter description is about is a young girl who would always get bullied and who went to a creepy libaray. What I really like about this is that I got to make my one about her having a happy life but than turning it into a scary life. 

Tense - Past , Present and future

Our learning for today was writing. What my group did for writing is tense. What we learnt was past , Present and Future. What we did was we had to fill in the spaces and write it in blue. What I really like about this was I got to learn more about the tense. The tense I really like is the past tense. The reason why I like the past tense is because I find it more easier.

Kiwi Can

In the morning we had Kiwi Can with Miss Lily and Mr Matt they were a kiwi can teachers for the whole year. What we did for kiwi can is learn about encouragement. What encouragement means is you need to encouragement each other and be positive not negative. Than we played a game called change places if... and the other game was called Ball tag. What I really like about kiwi can is that I got to work with my team mates and try to win and than we did and I was really happy.

Blog Post Analysis

Our learning today was on maths. What we did was we got to give reasons why we didn't really post that much in each year we have been blogging. As you can see on my DLO I have started with 2015 - 2017 because I came to this school in 2015 and I did'nt really know how to use a blog but now I know how to so that is why I am keep on getting higher and higher when I blog and you can also see that I have a goal on the bottom so I can try to achieve that this term.